I’m a fan of the verse and the beat and everything, but I’m not so much a fan of the chorus. It sounds like it is meant to be silly in some ways, but nothing else sounds like it is meant to be taken lightly. Maybe make the chorus match the overall tone of that track. It sounds good so far.
March 25, 2010 at 9:16 am
I’m a fan of the verse and the beat and everything, but I’m not so much a fan of the chorus. It sounds like it is meant to be silly in some ways, but nothing else sounds like it is meant to be taken lightly. Maybe make the chorus match the overall tone of that track. It sounds good so far.
March 25, 2010 at 9:25 am
I feel you…but the beat is not mine, it is by an artist named Tunday. I am merely rapping on his beat and have no power to change the chorus!!